Original Doujinshi
Feral Spirit
Feral Spirit
By julian1
- Submitted:
- 2y 17wk ago by julian1
- Category:
- Original
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- Type:
- Doujinshi
- Resolution:
- 1,154x1,622
- Size:
- 458 kB
- Views/Downloads:
- 219/11
- Comments/Favorites:
- 9/5
okay... this is only half the pic. i'll upload the other half later.
you see, the main reason the fire looks unrealistic because i didn't make an effort to make it good... it was a quick artwork, you see, but the sketch takes a lot of time...
anyway, i need more comments for this
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reminds me of shishio from rurouni kenshin...
..i
think if the bandages wouldn't be as uniformed.. (eg, there would some that will
overlap, wrinkles, folds, torn up) it would add more realism to it..
but
it's still pretty good!
Ohhh really awesome! I love the character design and I love your shading!
I
really love the details you have
Colored
pencils are hard for me to shade with
ccoooolll! nice shading, nice character, cool fire~
i really like your idea there! <3
Hum... a fire user ^_^
Your blood stains are really awesome ! He's some kind of kakashi masked man isn't he ?
. Oh,
and your guy doesn't have nails 
Anyway, the fiery wolf is great, but your flames (the upper part) are a bit 'unreal', they look like they're restrained from being real flames
Otherwise, nice details for the clothes and coloring, though i think it'd be better to have him stand with his palm up (or maybe in a naruto rasengan style, with the fire clearly pouring from the palm). Here we can see that the fire comes from the palm, but the stance doesn't look very natural... in a way
Good job anyway !
Hello Julian,
You certainly have a talent for drawing. However I would have not added the text on the clothes because it never looks as if it was a part of the clothes... My most favorite part is the dog or wolf... I really love it. And as I said already... make more landscapes, city views... you are REALLY good in these. Keep up the good work.
I
love to look at your doujinshis!
like chisaikame said the bandages are a littlr too uniform, but even so they look good. the fire is kinda weird shaped, but still good. everything else and the coloring is great.
oww fire..
i like playing with fire..figuratively speaking! weeheee!^__^
as usual, good coloring. ur concept works with it.
This is extremely incredible, it's one of my many favorite submissions of yours.
The character is incredible. I like how you add so much detail to every little thing. And like someone else pointed out, I think it'd look better if you had his palm facing upwards. Because the way it's drawn now doesn't really fit his stance.
I see what you mean about the fire at the top, but you know, this is still an impressive piece of art. The Fire wolf is extremely cool. I can't draw animals as well as you.
Well, great job once again, and I'm off to see your other submissions...as I have much catching up to do.
well, i thought of making his palm facing up, but it looks crappy.