Wow, very very beautiful doujinshi ^O^. Fav from me

Your works are so annoyingly perfect, it's just disgusting !

Anyway, apart from saying that your coloring is awesome, as well as shading and level of detail (that flower pattern... OMG !), she's got a really nice expression.
BUT, her hand is really weird, especially around the wrist (plus she has no fingernails), it looks a bit swollen. Also, the part where the shoulder merge with the rest of the cloth is too abrupt, i believe curves would have been better (it's too sharp).

Oh well nevermind, i'm gonna fav this anyway (too much favs already, argh !)

The colous makes it feel magical and its really fantastic...

my only complain is the hand.. it really looks odd..
but apart from that, again, you did a wonderful job on the drawing.. i love the colours you used.. >__<
and the atmosphere is so magical..

This one's breath-takingly stunning - seriously!
I have hardly ever seen such an amazing colouring like in your image here. The colours look like some liquid substance and the highlights are great. The lines are a bit jagged like you already said but I like them for being so thin and elegant.
Really awesome.

love the colours on the kimono...

nice work! this gets a fav and a dl from me.

*Chews on candy* Wow, your latest artworks look amazing. I love the character design and the colors you choose for the entire setting/character. Everything atcually looks pretty neat and I enjoying texture of the colors. This is a wonderful job and also very dreamy one. Another great work Rythem-sama. I am always looking to more. Thank you for sharing your works with us.

I know I say this everytime, but your doujin rox.
Your use of pastel hair colours is always interesting to look at since we don't see people walking around with 5 different hair colours xD
It looks great overall - the left eye seems to be at an awkward angle somewhat to the face, but it still looks good!
Nice doujin as always. keep it up!

omg, rythem is pro! WOW! I totally wish I could CG and draw like that! *dances* - *can't stop dancing*. WOWOWOWOW! This is totally awesome! Thanks a bunch for sharing it! :-)

The colouring is just gorgeous ... I really love how you did it, looks like watercolours. But some lines are off, making it less appealing in some parts. Mainly in the hair, but I simply love this work from you, good work.

great work! keep it up like this ;-)

Just like your previous drawing, it's awesome. I get to see few high quality doujinshi here... (well, in my tastes anyway, but wahtever...) and yours seem to always make it to the top of my list.

Very very Nice!

Kirei na~ I love the colors actually Wish I could draw hands like that >.>

It looks very dreamy, i like it!:)

Lovely, just lovely. Thank you sooooo much for sharing. *hugs you*

Hello Rythem ,

You love me now, I did full view ;P
It's nice.I think that the colours are a little bit blurry.
Well, ok I blame PS7 ;.
*_* But it looks o.k overall...ive seen your userpage, looks amazing O_O.
Very nice stuff.
Well try harder and keep up the good job
I'm sure you can do it^^
Ciao, *runs off to have lunch and then goes to school...EXAMS..AHHH*

The lineart is "cutting" into the coloring, which is the only thing remotely negative I have to say about this. Because the coloring job is awesome, and the picture itself is beautiful. If you can find some way in making your linework softer, your pictures ight turn out to become something really special.

Edit: You mention that resizing ruins the lineart? May I see the full version, then, if possible?

fantastic beauty, clean, wonderful, soft, everything is just wonderful, your art is always a pleasure to look at. Just looking at this piece brings only the most wonderful feeling to my eyes. Love the softness of it. The girl is perhaps near to flawless.
*favs* <-----fav whore.

lovely scan is all I can say

Very nice, clean artwork!

wow she's cute, i like the way you put the light effects coz it doesn't hurt the eyes.. and i also like the way you colored her

Very beautiful doujinishi, a definate fav in my book great work

THIS IS JUST BRILLIANT! LOVE IT!